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Monster by ~Christian-soilder:iconChristian-soilder:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Open


Monster
by Brandon M.

Take this sin away from me
I hate myself
The way i feel
I m sick of feeding this monster
The little pieces of my soul
I hate the way i am
I hurt others in my deception
Take it from me God
I don't want it anymore!
©2005-2009 ~Christian-soilder
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Author's Comments

Wrote about the sin that gripped me for so so long.And how it tried to devour me.

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~sweetdemise Apr 12, 2005, 5:01:54 AM
Very good! :heart: ^^ You're going to have to teach me how to write poetry some day :XD:

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"Marble roads are a poor man's golden grounds."
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~mgnrothfus Apr 12, 2005, 5:12:46 AM
thats really cool where did you get that talent.

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I am who I am
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~Christian-soilder Apr 12, 2005, 9:49:02 AM
its a gift from God nothing i can do

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"Just when they think they have the answer, i change the question!"

Oh no Mr. Kool aide man. You and your big frutiness you had better fix that hole you put in the wall before my dad comes home and sees it and beats me with a toaster!- Dane Cook
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~Christian-soilder Apr 12, 2005, 9:51:00 AM
ok :smooch: i will
i miss you ;_____; be home soon :tears:

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"Just when they think they have the answer, i change the question!"

Oh no Mr. Kool aide man. You and your big frutiness you had better fix that hole you put in the wall before my dad comes home and sees it and beats me with a toaster!- Dane Cook
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~sweetdemise Apr 15, 2005, 8:18:08 AM
HI!!!!!11 This is uber late...but :smooch:

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"Marble roads are a poor man's golden grounds."
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~evergrateful Apr 15, 2005, 11:51:55 PM
Coolness. Sure need to say that to God right now in my life, since I have let the monster get far too big and strong against me. God help us!
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~soldier4christ Jul 30, 2005, 2:24:52 PM
really good you get the point across strongly .
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~soldier4christ Jul 30, 2005, 2:24:53 PM
really good you get the point across strongly .
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~Xangelic-samuraiX Jan 12, 2006, 12:11:00 PM
Hmmm...you know, often I think He leaves it up to us to crucify it because it represents the choice that we must make (if we want Him over the sin). :shrug: That's something He's been showing me lately.

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